DnB non finished liquid tune :)

[Olyanko]

Hi

lol my english is bad so i cant write anything about this track .. just listen it and give me some feedback .. thanks

https://soundcloud.com/olyanko%2Fliqweed-new-2%2Fs-rgysi

 

[Nucleoid]

Build up the start a bit. the song comes out of nowhere!
I'd try some effects on the piano to make it a bit more interesting before the drop.
Also bring down the main synth a bit, it seems a little loud in the mix.

Contentwise, though it is perfect! Transitions could be a bit cooler even, but everything runs smooth from one in another.
I love the heavy subbass at the drop, too!

Great start, I'd love to see the end result!