Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by junglistguy2221, Aug 28, 2013.
i've never made a proper neurofunk track before, but i thought i'd give it a go!
digging those drums!
nice one mate. gonna work on it more, but its def the best thing i've ever made in an hour ha
anyone got any more ideas of where to take it?
I can't really put into words where i would take it but it sounds good so far. I'd love to remix/collaborate on this material.
sorry but there's not a finished track to remix yet anyway. also i find it hard to collaborate on tracks, like a lone wolf.
thanks for feedback
somehow the background atmospherics at the drop don't work for me, they contrast the general style of the tune too much, maybe try something else or use diminished chords on them, maybe try something more industrial? also I am personally not really feeling the vocal sample, could just be me though
drums are pretty good, maybe add some hihats or a break or something like that after a while? (like after 16 bars maybe get a hi hat loop going, then take it out again or something like that to give it more variation)
bassline sounds pretty nice
thanks for the detailed feedback. i'll try those things out with the next version.
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