Drum & Bass Nick Kaplan - Alchemy (WIP) Liquid DnB

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Nick1727, Nov 3, 2011.

  1. Nick1727

    Nick1727 New Member

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    Ok, so this is the song Im currently working on. I think its still a little rough so I have to do some fine tuning but this is the basic progression and lay out. Tell me what you all think! o ya, and btw, be brutally honest lol. Seriously, im down with the whole "constructive criticism" thing.

    Things I want to know
    - hows the mix?
    - does it feel too simple?
    - What would you change?
     
  2. nusphere

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    Sounds luuuuvleee :D some really interesting and quite unique musical ideas here, love the use of space. The drums need to be relatively louder. Some subtle vocal elements may help anchor this track and give it a context, mysterious half heard conversation or atmospheric whispers could really add something to this already interesting piece.
     
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    Thanks for the advice! I think the atmospheric whispers is an AWESOME idea! gona get on that right away lol :D