Nice Monday - Night Life

[Nice]

Hey guys, new track up. Would love to know what you think! Still a WIP so it's just a clip, feedback/comments/tips very welcome.

EDIT : Updated the track!

https://soundcloud.com/nicemonday%2Fnight-life

 

[sten360]

You've come a long way man, nice tune!
For feedback, well I'd make some more variance for those sweeps, and try to add several sweeps at once with different lenghts (but balance them out) because right now they are too easily distinguishable, sound a tad flat and some end too suddenly. Just try to make them more natural and have more going on. Also, maybe tone down that little vocal (I guess it's from break?) a bit and I'd also try to make the bass even a little fatter. Good luck mate.

 

[luciduk]

wicked little tune mate

 

[Nice]

Thanks for the replies! Yea, the intro and sweeps are kind of sloppy right now, just threw something together that I could listen to since I won't have time to work on it for a few days.

 

[Nice]

Updated the track! Any more feedback? I'm still tweaking the vocal choppage happening around 1:48.

 

[Nice]

updated for the most recent version, would love some feedback. other than a few small tweaks with the mixdown the track is now mostly finished!

 

[bowser]

drum work is quite nice, needs a little bit more bass

 

[miszt]

nice work, as said already, needs a bit more bass

 

[EvezDroppin]

i likie it, simple quite effective tho, id like some pads in their, switch things up a bit!