Nice Monday - Let It Rain (liquid dnb)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Nice, Mar 28, 2011.

  1. Nice

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    updated the track! feedback on the vocals would be great, as well as anything else, thanks

     
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  2. Nice

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    shameless bump!
     
  3. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    - drums are too hard for this song
    - piano just seems off altogether (as well as being about 3db too loud)

    - tune has got a good vibe and potential, so dont take my neg crit to pesonally!
     
  4. Project 7

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    Is it a piano? sounds like a guitar to me lol, but it does need to be turned down a bit, it overpowers the rest of the sounds. It has good potential though.
     
  5. Nautilus

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    I really like the bass/melody combo in this, although I think the melody has a fairly annoying instrument. I'd vary the melody a bit, even if you send it through some eq muting phases. keep up the work.
     
  6. Scamar

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    Snare needs to be a bit more crisp and also reduce the volume of the piano. This tune has a lot of potential though.
     
  7. Nice

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    Thanks a bunch everyone for the feedback! It's realllly helpful.
    @Richie, negative feedback is the BEST feedback as it helps me improve, I never take it personally.
    @project 7, it is a piano but heavily EQ'd
     
  8. Fishy:)

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    Not really feeling the melody or the instrument used im sorry man
     
  9. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    the part of the melody on the 5th bar (or 9th) if u wanna call it that, really isnt the right note to take it too, obviously my opinion. just kills the flow of the track, bring down that instrument , bring up the bass, maybe slightly softer snare.
    i like the melody and the bass until that duff note tho mate was moving while listening to it!
     
  10. Fragmency

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    the "let it rain" vocal is some kinda untimely
    it's a bit to fast i think, but not quite sure

    at the moment it does sound like someone is just randomly saying it during the song... i dont know...

    the bassline is sweet though!, i think that this could be a really good tune man, keep it up!
     
  11. Nice

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    updated the track, changed the timing of the vocal and some other small things, let me know what you guys think!