- drums are too hard for this song - piano just seems off altogether (as well as being about 3db too loud) - tune has got a good vibe and potential, so dont take my neg crit to pesonally!
Is it a piano? sounds like a guitar to me lol, but it does need to be turned down a bit, it overpowers the rest of the sounds. It has good potential though.
I really like the bass/melody combo in this, although I think the melody has a fairly annoying instrument. I'd vary the melody a bit, even if you send it through some eq muting phases. keep up the work.
Snare needs to be a bit more crisp and also reduce the volume of the piano. This tune has a lot of potential though.
Thanks a bunch everyone for the feedback! It's realllly helpful. @Richie, negative feedback is the BEST feedback as it helps me improve, I never take it personally. @project 7, it is a piano but heavily EQ'd
the part of the melody on the 5th bar (or 9th) if u wanna call it that, really isnt the right note to take it too, obviously my opinion. just kills the flow of the track, bring down that instrument , bring up the bass, maybe slightly softer snare. i like the melody and the bass until that duff note tho mate was moving while listening to it!
the "let it rain" vocal is some kinda untimely it's a bit to fast i think, but not quite sure at the moment it does sound like someone is just randomly saying it during the song... i dont know... the bassline is sweet though!, i think that this could be a really good tune man, keep it up!
updated the track, changed the timing of the vocal and some other small things, let me know what you guys think!
