Nice Monday - Let It Rain (liquid dnb)

[Nice]

updated the track! feedback on the vocals would be great, as well as anything else, thanks

https://soundcloud.com/nicemonday%2Flet-it-rain

 

[Nice]

shameless bump!

 

[richie_stix]

- drums are too hard for this song
- piano just seems off altogether (as well as being about 3db too loud)

- tune has got a good vibe and potential, so dont take my neg crit to pesonally!

 

[Project 7]

Is it a piano? sounds like a guitar to me lol, but it does need to be turned down a bit, it overpowers the rest of the sounds. It has good potential though.

 

[Nautilus]

I really like the bass/melody combo in this, although I think the melody has a fairly annoying instrument. I'd vary the melody a bit, even if you send it through some eq muting phases. keep up the work.

 

[Scamar]

Snare needs to be a bit more crisp and also reduce the volume of the piano. This tune has a lot of potential though.

 

[Nice]

Thanks a bunch everyone for the feedback! It's realllly helpful.
@Richie, negative feedback is the BEST feedback as it helps me improve, I never take it personally.
@project 7, it is a piano but heavily EQ'd

 

[Fishy:)]

Not really feeling the melody or the instrument used im sorry man

 

[EvezDroppin]

the part of the melody on the 5th bar (or 9th) if u wanna call it that, really isnt the right note to take it too, obviously my opinion. just kills the flow of the track, bring down that instrument , bring up the bass, maybe slightly softer snare.
i like the melody and the bass until that duff note tho mate was moving while listening to it!

 

[Fragmency]

the "let it rain" vocal is some kinda untimely
it's a bit to fast i think, but not quite sure

at the moment it does sound like someone is just randomly saying it during the song... i dont know...

the bassline is sweet though!, i think that this could be a really good tune man, keep it up!

 

[Nice]

updated the track, changed the timing of the vocal and some other small things, let me know what you guys think!