Nice Monday - Let It Rain (liquid dnb)

richie_stix

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#3


- drums are too hard for this song
- piano just seems off altogether (as well as being about 3db too loud)

- tune has got a good vibe and potential, so dont take my neg crit to pesonally!
 
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I really like the bass/melody combo in this, although I think the melody has a fairly annoying instrument. I'd vary the melody a bit, even if you send it through some eq muting phases. keep up the work.
 
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Thanks a bunch everyone for the feedback! It's realllly helpful.
@Richie, negative feedback is the BEST feedback as it helps me improve, I never take it personally.
@project 7, it is a piano but heavily EQ'd
 

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the part of the melody on the 5th bar (or 9th) if u wanna call it that, really isnt the right note to take it too, obviously my opinion. just kills the flow of the track, bring down that instrument , bring up the bass, maybe slightly softer snare.
i like the melody and the bass until that duff note tho mate was moving while listening to it!
 

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the "let it rain" vocal is some kinda untimely
it's a bit to fast i think, but not quite sure

at the moment it does sound like someone is just randomly saying it during the song... i dont know...

the bassline is sweet though!, i think that this could be a really good tune man, keep it up!
 
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