Sounding promising but have to agree about the pre-drop. I think I can see where your going with it though, try making the break a little longer so you have room to cleanly play the sounds as the break feels quite hurried. Try leaving the acid-style bleeps out after the drop and then re-introducing them later as I feel they are softening the impact quite a lot. Some quality sounds there, as with all WIP's it will be interesting to see how you move this forward. Keep up the good work man.