Nice Monday - A Few Short Moments

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Nice, Aug 16, 2011.

  1. Nice

    Nice Member

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    hey guys new track up



    it was really hard to make a bassline that fit with the vocals and i still think they are a bit out of key but i hope its not THAT bad :)

    any feedback would be great!
     
  2. luciduk

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    sounds lovely dude, i think its in tune but i see what you mean it does seem slightly out... hmm hard to tell because they are so many octaves apart. great tune anyway dude i like what you done
     
  3. subprime

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    Is the first note of the bassline a semitone flat? I have trouble with hearing that low stuff sometimes too, one trick is to raise your bassline by an octave or two and then it's easier (imo) to hear the distinct pitch, get it right, drop it down again.

    Sounds pretty cool overall tho. Nice one.
     
  4. Fishy:)

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    Ur snare is abit silent i think. and i see what u mean it sound a little weird;P but still pretty nice