Newish little ditty needs help please.

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Not really sure if I should keep going with this at all. Any thoughts are appreciated and well taken. Thank you.

https://soundcloud.com/michael-goetz-975677037%2Fb-1

 

[maschinistom]

hi Michael, I like this one. good intro, draw my attention right from start. pls look at processing the drums further at the hats and snares coming on from around 0:22.
what I'm missing then is the BIG beat dropping in at some point of the track. maybe you intend not to do that which is fine.
personally, I think a heavy kick and snare beat would fit the track very well, maybe combined with a heavy neuro synth bass.
just my 2 cents ... keep it up bro!

 

[Leniz]

Cant hear any sub-bass at all