newest minimal techno tune, thoughts?

[Mimical]

Hi all just finish my track although it hasn't properly been mastered yet as I'm useless in that area. Feedback is welcomed

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdannydarka%2Falix-perez-blueprint-vs-dub-phizix-marka-danny-darka-remix

 

[Mimical]

Hi all just finish my track although it hasn't properly been mastered yet as I'm useless in that area. Feedback is welcomed

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdannydarka%2Falix-perez-blueprint-vs-dub-phizix-marka-danny-darka-remix

woops forgot the actually link
https://soundcloud.com/dannydarka/danny-darka-lost-clip