new work in progress, opinions?

[Psyrus]

gonna alter the melody sounds theyre a bit basic at the minute but apart from that what u think?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/81619779ff82836b/

 

[elmaruk]

Ok
It is sounding good.
If it were me id scrap that lead synth you got there, i personally think its just way to wobbley perhaps but some effort into making fit better.
saying that, when your second reese comes in it does fit much better.
The drums are sounding nice, could maybe do with some fills here and there? perhaps another harder break.

 

[GrapeOne]

id make the synt coming in at around 0:22 sound way harder
to me it doesnt really fit into the track and kinda destroys the nice dark sound :/

 

[Psyrus]

yeah noted mad like i said melody sounds need work, tyrin to get a specific sound i bin workin on it for days cnat quite get there, but im close >.<

 

[luciduk]

sorry mate zshare doesnt agree with me get it on soundcloud and ul prob get more feedback

 

[Psyrus]

yeh mate ill have finished version soon ill just wait and post that up