new work in progress, opinions?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Psyrus, Oct 21, 2010.

  1. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

    Joined:
    Oct 30, 2008
    Messages:
    81
    Likes Received:
    0
  2. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

    Joined:
    Aug 3, 2009
    Messages:
    1,749
    Likes Received:
    26
    Location:
    Bristol
    Ok
    It is sounding good.
    If it were me id scrap that lead synth you got there, i personally think its just way to wobbley perhaps but some effort into making fit better.
    saying that, when your second reese comes in it does fit much better.
    The drums are sounding nice, could maybe do with some fills here and there? perhaps another harder break.
     
  3. GrapeOne

    GrapeOne New Member

    Joined:
    Oct 17, 2010
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Vienna
    id make the synt coming in at around 0:22 sound way harder
    to me it doesnt really fit into the track and kinda destroys the nice dark sound :/
     
  4. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

    Joined:
    Oct 30, 2008
    Messages:
    81
    Likes Received:
    0
    yeah noted mad like i said melody sounds need work, tyrin to get a specific sound i bin workin on it for days cnat quite get there, but im close >.<
     
  5. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 25, 2009
    Messages:
    3,642
    Likes Received:
    5
    sorry mate zshare doesnt agree with me get it on soundcloud and ul prob get more feedback
     
  6. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

    Joined:
    Oct 30, 2008
    Messages:
    81
    Likes Received:
    0
    yeh mate ill have finished version soon ill just wait and post that up