DnB New WIP, would appreciate some feedback.
- Thread starter Aetherial
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Bart Barnes
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Yes
I think the atmosphere of the intro is good but i think it needs more of that piano from bar 17. Just like chop it up and have it throughout the intro all jazzy like. It will take time to chop but would sound nice with the pad. If you use the commodores break you should make it more loud and pronounced or obvious especially in the intro because it does get good crowd reaction.
I like the drop you just need to tidy up the volume of the little percussion parts especially the bongo on the 4. If you had the jazzy piano coming back in it would be dope. But the chords you have are nice and you I could listen to this on headphones.
Few more sweeps and raises would be nice throughout and for the second drop. Like filter in the new pad as a build up. Or that piano jazz.
I think in a few more productions you could easily get a release.
I think the atmosphere of the intro is good but i think it needs more of that piano from bar 17. Just like chop it up and have it throughout the intro all jazzy like. It will take time to chop but would sound nice with the pad. If you use the commodores break you should make it more loud and pronounced or obvious especially in the intro because it does get good crowd reaction.
I like the drop you just need to tidy up the volume of the little percussion parts especially the bongo on the 4. If you had the jazzy piano coming back in it would be dope. But the chords you have are nice and you I could listen to this on headphones.
Few more sweeps and raises would be nice throughout and for the second drop. Like filter in the new pad as a build up. Or that piano jazz.
I think in a few more productions you could easily get a release.
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I left feedback,
"Absolutely gorgeous Intelligent tune here! I'd play it. Sounds great in my cheap headphones at loud and low volumes, tight Mixdown and Limit."
"Absolutely gorgeous Intelligent tune here! I'd play it. Sounds great in my cheap headphones at loud and low volumes, tight Mixdown and Limit."
