new wip i don't feel completely ashamed to show

wingz

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hi there, if you didn't know, i've been "producing" for roughly 4 months (rather learnt what knob does what, tons of vst plugins n shit) and this is the first thing i actually really like and which has potential imo.

i know the buildup is kinda ghey but i couldn't come up with something better atm, i'll try after few more tutorials. got any tips for me or advice?

x
 

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sounds good man, love that bass noise youve got going. drums sound tight too. all i could suggest is adding a few bits to progress it, maybe make the hats shuffle a bit after a couple of bars, add some new noises in. sounds good though!
 

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thanks man, yeah, i'll try to come up with some variation and maybe try to build some funny synths next time i'm at it. gonna ditch the pad strings though
 

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it's a quite punchy kick layered with an analogue kick with distortion, think it sounds quite beefy, cheers man
 
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Real simple, but really like it. Needs more going on in it though.

Vary the hats more as it progresses, and as someone above said, add a shuffle.

Also at the end of the 8bars you should put in something a little fancy to get you ready for it to drop back in for the next 8. Then maybe add some shakers to that section to give some more pace/rythem.


Good work - its a good style, keep it up
 
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