New/Updated track -- Looking for Feedback!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by sati, Jan 7, 2009.

  1. sati

    sati Code Monkey

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    Hey guys I posted this tune awhile ago and people said: "it rolls really well"

    I made some major updates to it and was hoping to get some serious feedback on it -- sound quality, flow, transitions, energy, you know, drums, whatever!


    track is called "room work" @ http://www.soundcloud.com/machineasy

    thanks a lot guys!!!

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    Hey guys, I tried to take everyone's feedback into account and make some changes -- I think the end result might leave a little to be desired in the mid-range -- please let me know what you think!

    I also moved it to soundcloud.com which is pretty damn close to the original

    http://www.soundcloud.com/machineasy

    track is called room work!
     
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  2. Dan M

    Dan M hard gay northern bear

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    well i reckon the sound quality is shocking unless thats ma pc or the host or summat but its gash this end. other than that the track is mint i like it its pretty rude.

    sorry but i cant really tell if the drums sound good cos of sound quality but the tune itself works. like the vocals
     
  3. sati

    sati Code Monkey

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    Thanks for the feedback man!

    I dunno, it could be virb.com let me post an mp3 of it -- what about the sound quality sounds jacked?
     
  4. JAGZ

    JAGZ Well-Known Member

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    nice track mate
    audio does lack something but the tune itself is pretty ill
    vox are cool ;)
     
  5. Pandemik

    Pandemik Bludclotaroonies!

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    good tracks but its very muffled, dunno if its compression or wot but not loud n clear.

    Tracks rides out nicely tho, and yh as the rest say good vox work :eek:)

    Pandemik

    http://www.myspace.com/pandemikuk
     
  6. MuttleyDubs

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    yeah track sounds heavy, pretty much no low-end coming through my monitors though, either thats the tune or maybe its virb...who knows!
     
  7. sati

    sati Code Monkey

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    Hey guys, I tried to take everyone's feedback into account and make some changes -- I think the end result might leave a little to be desired in the mid-range -- please let me know what you think!

    I also moved it to soundcloud.com which is pretty damn close to the original

    http://www.soundcloud.com/machineasy

    track is called room work!
     
  8. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    wont let me listen without an account?