New untitled Beat

[Labrat]

this is a little thing i made today, feedback and ideas for improvements would be great thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/figurative/untitled

 

[subprime]

That's good. I thought the snare was a bit light at first but it really suits the tune.
The rising synth you have after the breakdown sounds a little loud perhaps, compared to the over-all track.
I think there's room for something else in the higher end, some percussion or a percussive melody. And possibly the bass could have a couple of edits in the middle of the main sections?
I like the tune tho, sounds nice.

 

[msmith222]

this. i was gonna comment but then i read subprime's comments and he nailed it.

good tune, just needs a little love. keep it up.

 

[Labrat]

thanks, i deffinatly understand what you mean. It is pretty rough but i think i know what needs to be done to make it better.

Do you recon i lose the wobble on the bass? i dunno if i like it anymore

 

[luciduk]

i would probably turn the amount of wobble down (and the res) to make it more subtle. but keep it man, you need some differentiation in your bass)

i like this style, i like crisp, poppy beats, you just need to exagurate certain hits, put more confidence in ur snare and kicks. (turn them up and EQ/compress them) personally i would be experimenting with reverb at this stage also! get experimental with it


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