New Tune

DJ_DAFT

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Its only the third track ive made so i need critism to improve.
Track 3.
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Alryt Mate,

The tune is ok...needs alot of work tho before you could actually dance/listen to it....sorry to be so harsh...but sometimes you gotta be...Keep mucking bout with the softwear your using...and get sum tempo on them tunes...(speed the song up) also play around with the bass....

Daft
 

Zeal

Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex
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Right Track 4

Sounds like you got th edits pretty much down tbh

its the layering of the drums that needs work, and just general filling up of the tune.

Fx, leads, synths, hell even some film samples if you please lol

Work on layering ur drums up editing all the breaks the same, it will give it more power and definition

:)

good effort dude!
 

jay walker

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the tracks have soul them, nothing to really grab you and pull you in. dnb needs to 172 to 180bpm (tops) no idea what tempos these are but its either too fast or too slow. listen to certain artists that your feeling, an use it for track layouts and structuring. Your a very long way off from a complete tune, but some of the ideas can definitley be worked on. harsh but fair :D
 
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