Why no one has given feedback? Oh well, what I think is that it needs clearer sub, it has some drive in it now I think. And it has to be a little higher in mix, secondly the bass should be eq'd it feels like it's missing some frequencies like lower mid? It's weird sounding and hard to feedback.
Really strange intro(but it works for me), the bass needs work but it sounds good(maybe split the frequencies to lows/mids/highs). Also the drums would be better if they were harder, more punchy, however the tune has really dark feel to it and i like it and would love to hear a finished version.