NEW TUNE - Time Shift (jump up DNB)

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  1. dafo93

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    The intro was nice, the filtered drums building up to the drop and then......Fraid you lost me after that. Not the ideas, just the drums, bass, not really doing it.
    Love those pads and intro sounds tho!
    Needs a lot of work on the production as far as the drums and bass go,....and considering the genre.?..?..!!!
    PS. I get what you were doing, good ideas, just didn't sound right.
     
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    I'll take your advice into account and thanks for the feedback!
     
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    First of all matey never use youtube to showcase your tunes if your wanting feedback on production - the quality of the streaming is so poor its hard to tell if its you or youtube thats at fault. Anyways on a quick listen the drums need a bit of variation they sound a bit lacking and flat plus at the drop it sounds like you've looped a drum fill which should come at the end of a bar?? I really like the intro good work there but the rest of the tune needs work and also a proper ending for mixing purposes?? that is of course if you want your tune to be dj friendly?
     
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    Cheers for the feedback. Yeah i think I will work on this tune, reckon it has potential. I've only been doing this since January you see, so it can only get better :)
     
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    keep at it fella, wait for the obsession to take hold!!! :)
     
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    marcelkennard Storms comin in Annie

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    The bass that comes in at 1.42 has some potential, the line isn't half bad, and the pads are pretty sweet braaaaaaaaaaa, not bad if uv just started
     
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    totally not feeling them drums, really like the other elements though!!!
     
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    Cheers for the feedback! Lol, I'm pretty confused about what to do to the drums because I've had some people telling me that they think the drums are awesome, and others saying they aren't keen on em. It's cool how everybody has different views :)