new tune "The day off"

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by llSpaMll, Aug 30, 2009.

  1. llSpaMll

    llSpaMll Member

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    did another one in reason callin it the day off lol the samples are of course from ferris buellers day off, and any feedback would be stellar.

    on my myspace im to lazy to mediafire it and its easier to listen to anyways

    http://www.myspace.com/llspamll
     
  2. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    nice intro, drums sound good, sounds are interesting. bass sounds are brutal, production on this is really nice. good breaks, nice motion. maybe a little more variety in the beat, but overall really good!
     
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    stellar thanks for actually commenting back and so soon too :D oh by vary up the beat you mean the bassline or the drums im guessin drums ill do it up but hopefully it should be finished soon big ups for the brutal bass sounds comment.
     
  4. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    i can see what you were doing with this

    rolls along ok

    Drums need a lot more work tho, they need a lot more power behind them. They also need more edits to keep them interesting

    The track needs a general fill out imo

    Keep working it man :)
     
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    ye ye big ups for the reply, yeah drums aren't as heavy as they should be but ill be doin that n changing it a bit more its just the general beat until its finished i just started it today made it in about 3-4ish hours but thx ill do what i can
     
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    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Perc sounds right where it needs to be... Prod as a whole sounds great... and that vocal sample is nice, loud and audible.

    The main 'lead' bass... I'm sorry, but I'm not feeling the patch AT all... I think the riff is neat and fun.. but the patch isn't doing it for me. Your other bass fill sounds are solid.

    Track is full of neat sounds.


    Drums are a bit 'meh' beause you don't do any fillwork or edits.
    Cool but unpolished imo.




    solid Prod though:)
     
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