new tune - schizo

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by junglistguy2221, Sep 15, 2009.

  1. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Woulda liked a bit more punch/body to the bass on the drop.
    It's kinda there but it's not. Bit strange.
    Keep at it.
     
  3. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    yeah i was quite enjoying that tune after it dropped the bassline, its quite groovy!!

    before the drop tho it was a pretty empty tune, just thought it lacked a solid rhythm or pad to roll the intro through really
     
  4. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    intro definately needs work, just generally more going on and building it up to the drop

    Bass is ok, drums are rolling along ok, i think the kick n snare need more going on

    One that wobbly bass comes in the tune makes alot more sense to me, thats actually quite kool

    id be tempted to make this the main drop that comes in straight away and scrap the plain bass part at the start

    dru s defo need to be looked at though, this could be quite a kool tune man
     
  5. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Wish the Intro had more going on...
    Perc is chunky.

    1:25 - :yeah!!:

    Jammin from that point on ^


    Do some edits/fillwork on those drums and you should be good to go for 5 mins.