New Tune Mr christain 'n' Billy b-In The Way

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I Am Not The King
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youve got some nice ideas in there but over all this sounds very novice and needs very much work. dont know where to start really but try adding reverb (high freq) to the intro strings and amping the bass on the, well, bass. keep at it.
 
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