NEW Tune / Locust - Deception

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dj Locust, Jan 17, 2010.

  1. Dj Locust

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    Hm i think the bass sounds really weird with the drums just sounds wrong.. its the way the bass sequence is contructed i think.. the actual sound is good
     
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    got a fair bit of potential to make a dark tune in there... but it just sounds too messy like trying to do 2 many things at once... good sounds in there tho
     
  4. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Yeah I like the drums, they got good potential. And the actual sound of the bass is nice and gritty, it just doesnt fit with anything. It sounds like the bassline has just been randomnly automated with no structure or rhythm to it.
     
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    thanx for the comments! it really helps me to improve my songs :)
     
  6. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    That bass is fucking awesome.
    For me the problem (if any) may be with having a very active bass and a very busy kick. I reckon it sounds more like a bare knuckle fight with them both competing for space.
    I reckon have a try with a simpler kick pattern, but hey, it's your tune.