Yeah I like the drums, they got good potential. And the actual sound of the bass is nice and gritty, it just doesnt fit with anything. It sounds like the bassline has just been randomnly automated with no structure or rhythm to it.
That bass is fucking awesome.
For me the problem (if any) may be with having a very active bass and a very busy kick. I reckon it sounds more like a bare knuckle fight with them both competing for space.
I reckon have a try with a simpler kick pattern, but hey, it's your tune.