not bad fella - think you need to cut up ya amen more - as it is its just running quietly behind your main kick and snare not very creative imo. the bass is very catchy, nice one!! but needs to be about an octave lower I reckon or whack a hefty sub under for more impact keep at it matey, you got the makings a good tune there
Not really my thing but I think there needs to be some more loooooooowwwwww range. =] Tune sounds rythmically right, everything is is time - Get some more layers on your drums. =] Easy.