new tune (dubstep)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by junglistguy2221, Dec 8, 2009.

  1. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    hole in my baggy/ low deep - spit fire remix
    let me know what you think
    & any tips would be much appreciated
    thanks
     
  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    The drums are too bare, and the bassline drags for me. It's like the whole thing's threatening to stop.
    Add some hits/fx sounds to the drums, add some low end to the bass, add some spark to the bassline.....keep at it.
     
  3. llSpaMll

    llSpaMll Member

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    always take subprimes advice with the effects n drums!! :p:p

    But i've got a suggestion for the bassline. other then making it drag liek sub says you could keep that sound but make like 2 edits of that synth for a diff sound to add to the bassline and give it some more variety.

    alot of what i make has trcks with like 5+synths >.> i may just go overboard but idk 2 -3 is always better then 1.
     
  4. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    seems like an ok tune, bit amateur but could imagine this bein in a mix (y)