new tune, drum & bass/breaks with electro bass

[junglistguy2221]

i don't really know what to make of this tune so some feedback would be really helpful. its called "like water," and it's on my soundcloud:

http://soundcloud.com/sunyatanoise

cheers

 

[junglistguy2221]

come on!

 

[junglistguy2221]

bump! one last shot at some feedback, someone must have something to say!

 

[3xit]

the intro has nice sounds but its way too boring.... just keeps on going and going.....

and its all ways the same melody.... very repetitive.....

Drums need to be a touch louder (the kick and snare especially, no power there) I quite like the bass line, would like some periods where its not too stabby....

so in all, more variation and turn up the drums