some of the drum hits sound like they have sequencing issues, not sure if that is an effect or something out of time. bass is pretty nice, and the drums have good impact. could fill out the tune a little more but this sounds really good so far.
not bad mad id say the same fill that tune up a lil more its a good tune put some more time in that one and its a killer good work just give the tune a bit more love and it will be really good
keep it up