NEW TUNE: CHORDAL

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by tarranjoe, Sep 28, 2008.

  1. tarranjoe

    tarranjoe Active Member

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    heres a little bit of liquid i've been working on the last couple of days. its still in the works but id appreciate a bit of feedback, would be more than happy to return the favour. also it should be streaming so theres no need to d/l.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/19547751ca41565f/

    cheers to anyone who takes the time
     
  2. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    Really like it mate! Keep it up!
     
  3. Mattix

    Mattix Sub Focus anyone?

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    Quality track mate! Think (in my opinion) that a few sweeps or fx in it when its about to drop would make it stand out a bit more but really like the melody and the sounds. Personnally im not to sure about the sort of flute sound that comes in but thats just me.

    As you said though mate, its still in the works. Let me know when you've finished it cos would love to hear it!

    Big Ups!!!
     
  4. tarranjoe

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    thanks alot for takin the time guys
     
  5. *Chloe

    *Chloe Well-Known Member

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    its so good taz. good luck finishing it.
     
  6. freestyle

    freestyle I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    hello...

    intro it ok, groovy man, i think it needs more, maybe a nice melody, o, something just happend:) yeah man, nothing bad to say about the tune, mix needs some work i think but overall a nice little roller.
    peace.
     
  7. tarranjoe

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    cheers for the feedback
     
  8. PHIL_LEAN

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    Im liking that. big up.
     
  9. thin king

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    that flutes needs some verb on it - the musicality of the tune is nice but the overall mix needs alot of work the drums need a beef up and the bass needs widening it all feels way too central at the mo - make a sub and keep it central and then whack the bass you have over the top but cut off the low end then put some chorus on it and it should make it sound wider and give the tune some much needed depth. I like it overall though and look forward to you finishing it :)
     
  10. tarranjoe

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    cheers man, ill take that on board
     
  11. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    really liking it .. you made that cool piano mellody yourself ? maybe work some more on the bass, it will give it much more warmth..
     
  12. tarranjoe

    tarranjoe Active Member

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    yeah, i wrote it myself, im not really down with ripping off whole melodys
     
  13. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    wicked stuff mate. nice work
     
  14. tarranjoe

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    cheers man
     
  15. intafuze

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    :mr_cool: NICE 1 MAN

    wicked vibe on this