[[[NEW TUNE]]] Bitch

Viperdnb

On his way.
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Aug 31, 2008
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Uk
GOT A NEW TUNE!
I'm pretty proud of this one...
Entitled: "Bitch"
I spent ages making this tune and planning the structure as i've noticed the intros in most of my songs drag on a bit, or so I thought.
Tell me what you think!

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kama

benkama.net
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I like it, proper wob wob wob and what have you. The beat could imo 'roll' a bit more, the hihats are sort of just hissing in the background. But I'm more of a break boy so i always love break stuff. At the breakdown you need something else than just drums and the vocal (the synth in the end sounded good why not use that?). Unless you did it especially for mixing with some specific other tune from that part.

Good show but like all wobble for me it gets boring quickly. You'd need to mix another track in pretty quick. You have good fills here and there and surprises working for you but it needs MOAR of those, just to keep interest.

Would shake the dancefloor pretty well with a simple quick 'mix in mix out'.
 

Nutek

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drums are nice and tight, but they don't roll enough, short but sweet intro. bassline could be a bit bassier but overall you got some nice ideas there (y)
 

Fratanize

Keepin the jungle alive
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easy pal. nice bassline fella. propa grimey. drums are cool too, individual.
nice groove to this track matey. sweet as
 

Mattix

Sub Focus anyone?
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This is a naughty little cheeky roller mate! Think its rude! Do think you need to make the drums a bit crisper tho.

Good work!
 
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