New tune advice needed

[dontcallcook]

Hey been makin tunes for a few months now but not really showed them to anyone so thought i should get some opinions on where im goin wrong etc. if you could check my soundcloud that would be great
http://soundcloud.com/dontcallcook

 

[thedkwbl]

very cool tune.

 

[dontcallcook]

cheers man err dont know how to reply to your comment on soundcloud but im usin logic. anyone else up for offerin any comments?

 

[dexter]

wrong section breh

 

[duttymonster]

love the '99 vibe of this stepper.

 

[Arch_er]

it`s fire!!!