DnB new tracks, need some critics

[dj-paranoia]

Hello guys

Here on soundcloud i just uploaded my new track (free download, btw)
https://soundcloud.com/dj_paranoia%2Fvico-wallary-the-orange-helicopter-tune
i really like it, but i think my sound can improve a lot more. To improve i think i really need some critics from you
so, please don't esitate. write what you think

 

[Leniz]

too slow? other then that the helicopter sample stops suddenly make it a bit smoother. And where is ur break down. Maybe add some variation

 

[dj-paranoia]

too slow? other then that the helicopter sample stops suddenly make it a bit smoother. And where is ur break down. Maybe add some variation

i usually produce at about 160 bpm... but i saw that here the average is 175 .... maybe that is a problem! i will try to fast my future prod many thanks

 

[RECollection]

i make stuff at 174. because its 87 halftime.. which has always been my preferred tempo.. half time dnb moves really well at that speed as well.. i will have another listen to this track when i have better speakers. on my laptop now..