tend to agree with Krispy on the intro, kinda jumps straight into it. that said it sounds pretty good, nice beats and synth. good droppage, synth is a bit quiet after the drop but the rest is well built. style is not my particular taste but can hear there's a fair bit of work gone into it and it's all the better for it.
not the biggest fan of the kick being with the snare, but nethertheless nice sound overall i like the movement in the bass too. yeh there needs to be a longer intro if you want to keep the verocity, layer things in gradually. but 2:11 bass change sounds nice and fierce. keep at this mate