New Track:)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fishy:), Jan 17, 2010.

  1. Fishy:)

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    nice idea this, like the pad u got goin on. listening on laptop so haven't heard the bass yet....

    might be me but it seems a little fast for chilled liquid, also not sure about the snare sound, comes across a bit harsh compared to the relaxed vibe from the pads.

    once i listen with headphones i'll feedback on the bassline, from what i can hear it sounds nicely put together, just a little fast.
     
  3. co0ke

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    nice pads, interestin chords pattern man. some notes on the bass are overpowering and masking some other elements, especially the pads but i dont know if this was intentional? sounds like the snare could do with cutting through the mix a bit more too (y)
     
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    Fishy:) Active Member

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    Allright:) thanks for the feedback both of u
     
  5. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Yeah I like your ideas for this track, but cant help wondering if it would benefit from being lowered to 165-170bpm. I also think the kicks need to come through the mix a little better, and the snare is very "hench" for this style of track!
     
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    Loving your pads and chords and that dolphin-like sound that comes about here and there, how'd you make that? Where did you get that woman moaning sample? I need something like that for my latest track, 'Fantastic orgastic'!
     
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    Alright ive taken ur feedback to consideration and ive updated the track:p 165 bpm, softer snare and a little change in the bass. http://soundcloud.com/fishy-1/panda-style

    harryp: its just a sawpad with phaser, the dolphin sound is just a random sample i got somewhere:p same with the vocal
     
  8. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    sounds like theres a compressor on the master bus, yeah?

    that bass is swallowing the mix it needs to be pulled back for the other elements to breathe man imo. keep going bud!
     
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    Ye its the fruity limiter
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    ah right, get the sonnox limiter if you can... its really good.
     
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    Ye Ill check that out:) track updated again btw think it sounds better now
     
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    Been saying creating waveform for 37 minutes wtf
     
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    that explains why i can't find the updated version on soundcloud!
     
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    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    not bad man. good effort
     
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    Fixed now:D and updated version
     
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    feelin that mate! nice n chilled! :D
     
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    nice, much better at a lower bpm imo, that snare fits a lot nicer than the old one too. love the bass ripple you got goin on, nice touch. filter on the hats after a couple of minutes sounds sweet also, as does the vocal.

    nice tune, would love to bump it on some proper subs :D
     
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    thanks all of u:)