I've heard that bizzare bass noise before, so I can only assume its a premade loop. Wheres the life in the song!? It sounds like its a 4 bar loop repeated for 4 minutes, with the occasional bass noise that doesn't fit.
the drums are too weak, needing more layers, compression, etc. not familiar with the loop pack, but you can see what happens here. if you are using a loop and not changing it into your own, it will get noticed pretty quickly. just needs a lot more time, effort, sound, eq.