the beat is solid, but i found the pattern to be kinda cheery and less militant? i duno if that makes any sense im kinda blazed. i like the fact that the track is 4.20 long as well tho!!! haha...
that main synth you have going on could be kinda painful if i turned it up any more maybe you could turn the cutoff down on that or something i dunno? i like the idea of this track tho the rising note is cool
the rising note does sound pretty cool, but things get a lil messy when you introduce the lazer fx sound (1:40)
i think this track would benefit from a high passed amen break sitting in the background to give it some meaty percussion.
n i think your distorted saw wave bass synth thing needs a bit more mid to make it sounds much more thicker,