new track WIP

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by st420, Mar 9, 2011.

  1. st420

    st420 Member

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    lost the session file for the one tune ive finished and started to remake it. this is just the intro and first 32 bars.

    advice and criticism welcome.

    more than happy to listen to your tracks too just post em here and ill let you know what i think :)

    http://soundcloud.com/struan/test1
     
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    This is obviously very WIP..

    The quick synth in the intro isn't going anywhere now, could do with some filters, automation, the works.

    Maybe some nice, drawn out atmospheric pads in the intro could make things a little more melodic?



    Builds a lot of vibes, that, and the anticipation becomes almost tangible. Don't necesarily need a full three minutes, though!

    Bass line is HEAVY! Love the pure sub stabs.
     
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    thanks for listening mate, will take on what you said, i know the intros pretty average haha i struggle with intro's