New Track - Train of Thought

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http://soundcloud.com/talon/train-of-thought

My first track done in Logic. The learning curve wasn't as hard as I imagined and I'm no longer troubled by limiting the number of tracks as I was in Ableton due to it's heavy requirements. :)

Anyway, have a listen. Still wondering how to go about adding vocals. DTX offered to master it so will send it off to him once it's ready.

Enjoy.

talon.
 

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The arrangement sounds good. Sounds a bit light across the track, like any punchiness has been stripped out of it. Can't tell if it needs a master or a remix. (I am only on headphones)
Nice light, easy going tune.
 
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Cheers mate. I'll probably finish it off this week, add some vocal chops/fx and variate those riffs a little more, a little too repetitive after listening with fresh ears. :)
 

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good work man really good structure and the beat sounds great, the keys and sounds are workin nicely. only thing i cud say is that the bass is a bit simple doesnt do much for the ears
 

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really feeling the way this builds up... bass aint nearly loud enough tho fam! needs to be louder and deeper..

everything else is bless
 
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