New Track - Train of Thought

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  1. druu

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    http://soundcloud.com/talon/train-of-thought

    My first track done in Logic. The learning curve wasn't as hard as I imagined and I'm no longer troubled by limiting the number of tracks as I was in Ableton due to it's heavy requirements. :)

    Anyway, have a listen. Still wondering how to go about adding vocals. DTX offered to master it so will send it off to him once it's ready.

    Enjoy.

    talon.
     
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    The arrangement sounds good. Sounds a bit light across the track, like any punchiness has been stripped out of it. Can't tell if it needs a master or a remix. (I am only on headphones)
    Nice light, easy going tune.
     
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    Cheers mate. I'll probably finish it off this week, add some vocal chops/fx and variate those riffs a little more, a little too repetitive after listening with fresh ears. :)
     
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    good work man really good structure and the beat sounds great, the keys and sounds are workin nicely. only thing i cud say is that the bass is a bit simple doesnt do much for the ears
     
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    really feeling the way this builds up... bass aint nearly loud enough tho fam! needs to be louder and deeper..

    everything else is bless
     
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    like the song man nice and clean, but agree bass could be more prominent.
     
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