Needs a good mix before the master. Just try to give your midbass more room. Especially in the part without vocals. Could be dope, but sounds too full and too much going on.
But sounding pretty good man!
Thanks guys I really appreciate the feedback - Im not too hot on mastering. My mastering involves sticking a plug in on the master and choosing a setting which is lame I know. Didn't realise the mix was off though so I can work on that. Nice one!
mine is up
epic intro, very well done. flows well afterwards, drop is good too.
the drums/perc are a bit too bright, try to EQ further here.
love the easy going atmo and choice of sounds/synth.
good work on the vocals, too!
what daw/system are you on bro?