new track - sweaty sack (wip)

[EvezDroppin]

ok so its not called sweaty sack but hopefully that will get ur attention hahaha.
just a track iv been tamperin with, only got the intro and few bars off the bassline basically just wanting to know what u people think.
any comments are much appreciated... if u just wana say whats bad bout it dnt care!
ill check ur track in return i know there seems to be too many to check lately!
ezzz

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/hereweeegoooooooooohhh.mp3.html

hahaha cheers monq

 

[monq]

An url wouldn't go amiss?

 

[daveylivewire]

I don't think the synths are really working together too well, sounds like they're really fighting each other in the mix. also there seems to be very little sub. The drums are punchy but the shuffles don't seem to work for me. I think most of the right elements are there, but the arrangement of the synths needs to be restructured.