this is a song i originally made 3 years ago and thought it had potential but wasn't happy with it. i've redone it 4 times over the past 3 years and am wondering what other people think of it. it builds and changes melodies so you have to be patient with it, the song is intended to be that way. whether that's a good thing or not, i don't know. i've remade this song so many times that i don't even know what sounds good anymore lol. i have friends telling me opposing things when i ask their opinion, some prefer a certain way i went with a certain version of this song, others prefer a different direction i went on a different version of the song. i won't post up all 4 versions, i'll just post the latest in hopes you guys can help provide some feedback.