New Track online

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ChestOr, Feb 7, 2010.

  1. ChestOr

    ChestOr Member

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    Hey there...

    It's been some 3-4 Weeks, since my last track has been released, so I somehow had the feeling I need to make a new one.

    Well , at first... I've got some major leaks in mixing and Mastering, because of my equipment and laziness.

    Second, I would like to here some thoughts from you guys, before i post mine...I'm having some trouble with some parts, sounds and arrengement, which i don't like too much anymore, but this track was made within 2 hours...still a lot of work to be done.

    http://soundcloud.com/user3399977/malice-in-wonderland
     
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    I like a lot about this one. The melodies, the pads, the funk. Very nice
     
  3. ChestOr

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    thx,

    Well, i thought that the Intro might a little too long, or the rest of song too short...Missing some balance between those parts.
    I also don't like the Synth (either sound or melody) that comes in, at the second part of the intro (~0.45min), really don't know how to fix it, maybe you have some ideas on it.

    I also need some Tips on how to make some good Risers/sweeps etc., or any Links where i can get Samples of such things.