New track in progress...needs feedback

[collymore]

Dear all,

Found this track I previous have worked on and put away and never finished it.... worked on it again and this isthere I am so far...feedback is much apriciated for this little track...specially for the vocal parts....

Cheers,

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fdont-go

 

[Nucleoid]

could have some more varation in the melody at the drop
oh, or put the vocals louder, that'll do.

You could put some more high pads or synths in it tho

 

[collymore]

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fdont-go

thanks for the tip...I will have a go with high pads and look into some more variation...cheers

 

[Alexi]

Really like the balance of the sub and the kick, cuts through the mix nicely.

Agree with turning the vocals up, the only other thing is to possible put a high passed break over the top as your hats sound very quantised and programmed at the moment.

Good tune though.

 

[collymore]

Thanks for the feedback...Listned to the track in the car this morning and it was easy to hear that the vocal needs to be tuned up a bit...thanks for pointing that out

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fdont-go

 

[parsons19]

Cool man, really liked the vocal elements

Good bassline too, and cool percussion.

Nice one!

 

[collymore]

thanks parsons19....and good luck with your new E.P...well produced

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fdont-go

 

[parsons19]

thanks parsons19....and good luck with your new E.P...well produced

Cheers man!

 

[Mr Fletch]

Havnt listened yet as I'm on my phone, will do later tho.

But one thing that is really bugging me............why are you embedding your track in every goddamn post you make? lol! It'll be much easier if you just embed it in your sig, save you the hassle each post!

 

[collymore]

@Fletch...would love to do it but don't know how....

---------- Post added at 21:43 ---------- Previous post was at 21:39 ----------

ahhh.....think I got it.....