New track in progress...needs feedback

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by collymore, Jan 31, 2012.

  1. collymore

    collymore Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    89
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Copenhagen, DK
    Dear all,

    Found this track I previous have worked on and put away and never finished it.... worked on it again and this isthere I am so far...feedback is much apriciated for this little track...specially for the vocal parts....

    Cheers,

     
  2. Nucleoid

    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

    Joined:
    Dec 20, 2011
    Messages:
    397
    Likes Received:
    11
    Location:
    Haarlem, Netherlands
    could have some more varation in the melody at the drop ;)
    oh, or put the vocals louder, that'll do.

    You could put some more high pads or synths in it tho
     
  3. collymore

    collymore Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    89
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Copenhagen, DK
    thanks for the tip...I will have a go with high pads and look into some more variation...cheers
     
  4. Alexi

    Alexi Drench Audio

    Joined:
    May 21, 2007
    Messages:
    997
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Bristol/Southampton
    Really like the balance of the sub and the kick, cuts through the mix nicely.

    Agree with turning the vocals up, the only other thing is to possible put a high passed break over the top as your hats sound very quantised and programmed at the moment.

    Good tune though.
     
  5. collymore

    collymore Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    89
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Copenhagen, DK
    Thanks for the feedback...Listned to the track in the car this morning and it was easy to hear that the vocal needs to be tuned up a bit...thanks for pointing that out
     
  6. parsons19

    parsons19 Active Member

    Joined:
    May 15, 2011
    Messages:
    1,056
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    UK
    Cool man, really liked the vocal elements :)

    Good bassline too, and cool percussion. :)

    Nice one!
     
  7. collymore

    collymore Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    89
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Copenhagen, DK
    thanks parsons19....and good luck with your new E.P...well produced
     
  8. parsons19

    parsons19 Active Member

    Joined:
    May 15, 2011
    Messages:
    1,056
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    UK
    Cheers man! :)
     
  9. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    Havnt listened yet as I'm on my phone, will do later tho.

    But one thing that is really bugging me............why are you embedding your track in every goddamn post you make? lol! It'll be much easier if you just embed it in your sig, save you the hassle each post!
     
  10. collymore

    collymore Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    89
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Copenhagen, DK
    @Fletch...would love to do it but don't know how....

    ---------- Post added at 21:43 ---------- Previous post was at 21:39 ----------

    ahhh.....think I got it.....