new track..good time.. for comments...please

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by collymore, Apr 18, 2011.

  1. collymore

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    Hi...
    new track i am working on...good time...not my normal style, but just played around a bit..a came up with this...comments are more that welcome.......and yes just noticed that Fishy's latest track are called almost the same..

    http://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar/good-time
     
  2. Nice

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    Add some end of phrase variations on the bass and drums. The loop is way too repetitive right now, or throw something else on the track to add variation. The first drop became really boring after a few repeats of the same thing. 1:37-2:14 was much better with the extra things happening. 3:00-3:26 didn't really add anything to the track, it was just 1 note with drums really. Just try to add some more variation to the track, it would really make it way better.
     
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    Thnks mr.nice for the constructive comments.....had a listen to the track in by car stereo last night, and the speakers had some serious problems with the bass..

    cheers
     
  4. Fishy:)

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    Nice title man lol
    I agree with what Nice said about the drums;P
    One thing is nice its really hypnotic, nice while stoned