About the tune though. sounds like its some bad quality yt rip xD
Snare sounds dull. Bass synth is too loud. Maybe render in a higher quality next time,
not much to say, but maybe just thinking that hihat might be too panned to left&right.
but I m listening to it with headphones right now (since it's like 3am in Japan),
maybe if I listen to it with speakers, it does not really matter.