New track from me, feedback welcome

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  1. mcsketcha

    mcsketcha Sketchamus

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    New Hip Hop track / video from me, feedback welcome

    After some really useful feedback on my older vids, I've written off the webcam thing and decided to just record the music, I did this at my mates last night. I used the Jedi Mind Tricks - Animal Rap Instrumental, although me and my mate have been making some of our own beats, so theres plenty in the pipeline, enjoy;

     
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    That's pretty damn cool Dan! Big ups
     
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    Cheers $marty, glad you liked it, il have a few more tracks up over the next few weeks, including a bit of dubstep.
     
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    EWOKS POTATOES GONNA POTATE

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    ill review more later or soon .. got alot on over next day or so .. bump it in a couple days .. but breifly, ill so its loads better mate .
     
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    Nice one mate, i look forward to your review, cheers for the comments and for listening, sound.
     
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    Anyone else had a listen???
     
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    I'll listen tonight.

    Did I get back to you on your other ones?

    If not, I'm sorry. I'm a cunt.

    Also, Ethix, you'll have some feedback the same time too.

    Me and my mate have got a new tune almost completely written, and will record in July (both going on holidays from now untill then) in a poroper studio so it'll be good quality. So watch out for Mindz Alike!
     
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    Nah I don't think you did in the end, but no worries mate looking back those webcam vids I made were such poor sound quality that they were hardly worth it lol. But yeah would like to know what you think of this new one as the recording is a lot better quality etc. Look forward to hearing your new track, Mindz Alike is a quality name by the way.
     
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    I'll listen tonight, if not probably Saturday.

    Haha, cheers man. Thought of it because we just kind of clicked when we met (sounds cheesy)

    My name is Cerberus, as in the three headed dog who guards the underworld in greek mythology.
     
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    really like this mate, nice one!
     
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    Sound mate, Cerberus is a quality name, rolls of the tongue nicely, yeah I love quoting greek mythology when writing, its such an interesting subject.

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    Cheers muzza, glad you like it, cheers for the comments and listening, sound.
     
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    Scatcat It don't mean shit

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    mate this is heavy - big instrumental, big lyrics and some sick graff - i wud say u mite wanna turn up the mic just a lil bit next time
     
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    Cheers mate, glad you enjoyed it, yeah the mic could have been a tad louder, il turn it up a bit on my next recording. Cheers for the comments and for listening, sound.
     
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    Nice dude, all bits and bobs are there for sure, love the track. Deffo need a decent mic tho dude if you're serious, the quality aint all there. Hit me up if you wana use my studio :)
     
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    this is cool mannn.. love that instrumental its tight.. like your flow as well man

    new mic (y)

    big ups
     
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    Cheers mate, yeah Jedi Mind Tricks have made some sick instrumentals, i shud be recording a track using my mates beats on monday. Yeah that would be quality mate, my mother in law lives in bournemouth so I'm up that way quite often il let you know next time im heading up that way. Cheers for listening and for the feedback.
     
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    yeah its definatly one of my favourite instrumentals, glad you like my flow. Cheers for the feedback and for listening, sound.
     
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    Pretty sick man.

    Like the lyrics a lot man.

    Your flow is mostly good, but a few parts it's a tiny bit choppy. Too many syllables in the first half of a bar then not enough in the second so it kind of seems a bit off. But it's only a few occasions.

    Another thing, is that it's the same kind of delivery throughout. Change your pitch in a few places, and emphasize certain words in certain places to give it a bit more life, if you get me? Some doubling up would easilly sort that out though.

    But overall mate, it's sick. Really like it. Good choice of beat too.
     
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    Cheers for having a listen mate and cheers for some really useful feedback. I should be recording another track on monday so I will keep everything you've said in mind. Yeah I love this instrumental, ive got a whole album of Jedi Mind Tricks instrumentals so gimme a shout if you want me to upload it in a zip folder to megaupload for ya.