New track for review

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Hi Fellas,

Just finished a new track and was wondering what you reckon. It's a different style for me and don't even know what you'd call it but tried mixing things up.

Would be great to hear your thoughts?

Thanks,

https://soundcloud.com/cross-0ver%2Fcross-over-let-me-go-home-master

 

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Anyone have a listen?

 

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Btw I'm not actually a new member I've posted on lots of peoples posts just using a new account

 

[risto orpus]

Really well mixes this one from what im hearing from my phone.
Really dope bassline and that beat really carries the flow.
My only gripe would probably be with the rap.
It works very well outside of the main chorus but kinda overshadows the cool sounddesign you got going when the chorus kicks in.
Im no proffessional myself, ( just a selftaught producer) sounda alot better produced than most of my sheithe.
Best advice i could give is that you could restructure your song to sound more like
Kasra & Enei - transmitter (ft. jakes)
Instantly got very similar vibes this and your song.
I hooe that i was of any help.
You defo got the talent to make more dope tracks i would reccomend giving minimalistic dnb a shot too.

 

[Radius]

Drop the Rap- its out of time, and detracts from what is a good starting point. Drums sound a bit flat,bring themout with a touch of reverb. A pad might be good or a few sfx ,add depth with fx.

UP me a cleaner version adn I'd play it