New Track feedback/criticism

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by scrTchs, Dec 25, 2014.

  1. scrTchs

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    Hey guys, Im a noob to the forum and producing music as well. I'm hoping I posted this in the right section of the forums. Will you guys check out this new track of mine and give me some feedback, I would greatly appreciate it.

    Merry XMAS

     
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    Anybody home?
     
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    This is purely from a dj's / listener's point of view; try simplifying your track. There's too much going on that doesn't fit in the mix, i'm not really sure what's going on. Focus on the main aim of the tune, what you want it to be about, whether that be the bassline or some kind of melody, then build the track around that in key.
     
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    Thanks for the reply man. I'll rework it and repost it another day!
     
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    And listen to your favourite tracks / artists to reference from their work and compare yours to theirs structurally ;)
     
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    Gonna have to agree with what this guy says^
    Now from one noob to another (I'd same I'm noobier than you tho so..)
    Track is kinda... going everywhere..
    There's some really sick sound design in there and the mixing is decent.
    The drums feel like they're trying to be punchy, so made put it to sidechain with the sub and some of the other sounds so that some of its lower end (especially the kick's) could come out more?
    It seems like there is structure though... somewhat... The beat just feels a bit everywhere @_@
    I like it though, it has some interesting vibes to it ^^
     
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    Thanks for the advice guys . I'm gonna scrap this one for now and start something new.