NEW TRACK- EMOTIONAL WRECKAGE....

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Hazadous P, Jun 21, 2009.

  1. Hazadous P

    Hazadous P New Member

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    Hi im kind of new to this, my mate {technic 1210 on this forum} advised me to join and to get some feedback on my tracks. So, what the hell. This is one of my most mellow, relaxing tunes using reason. I would be really grateful for any feedback and definately some pointers.

    Cheers

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/6167931061c0c53e/
     
  2. technic1210

    technic1210 ''VINYL VINYL VINYL''

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    bigup bishop!!!!finally joined the forum masive!:rave:
     
  3. Hazadous P

    Hazadous P New Member

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    Ha yeah mate, finally thought fuck it, need advice!!!:gslayer:
     
  4. subprime

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    Welcome mate. I like your sound. I did think the drums were a bit weak. They were defo in the background and quite samey. Need to get them forward in the mix and layer up those hats and shuffles.
    Nice
     
  5. Hazadous P

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    Thanks alot for taking the time to have a listen mate. I was thinking similar to you but wasnt sure if it was just me. Really appreciate it..
     
  6. fr00tyfr3sh

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    like your startup, even though its pretty slow. i was feeling the melody
    But the beat, u should start trying to make as much variations in it as possible
    and try to beef up that snare.
    Could hear what you were going for,
    Keep it up!