New track.. Constructive Criticism needed!

[Fazer]

New track - 'Dead Mans Hands', up online, here - http://www.myspace.com/fazerproductions

This is only about my 7th track, so some constructive criticism would be wicked, cheers peep's.

 

[logikz]

id like to have more things happen to the break. really dig the choir.

 

[logikz]

i listened to all your tracks, i think they show alot of promise. i found the jump up like synth work of suckerpunch pretty convincing actually, youre figuring it out nicely.