New Track By SpitFire .Feedback plz??

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by SpitFire101, Mar 8, 2009.

  1. SpitFire101

    SpitFire101 Member

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    http://www.megaupload.com/?d=DPQ1YTPN
    (theres the link)
    Its Called
    In Time.
    Plaz Have A lisin And Give Me some Feedback
    on what u think could change about the tune or what ever
    Cheers
    -lewis!
     
  2. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Locked..........

    intro is a bit random, it would be kinda kool if you filled it out more and made more sense of it, it kinda feels like uve slapped it in

    Bass is pretty unclear and the tune is slightly distorted

    The beats also sound like they need to be quantised, some of the hits are slightly out

    good effort tho man, keep at it

    try and make ur tunes smooth, and tie in nicely

    The synth that comes in the housy one is pretty kool

    :)
    Sorry if i sounded harsh bro, just trying to help you out
     
  3. SpitFire101

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    Nahh Man U Dnt Sound Harsh..
    ^^
    Yeah I know it was kinda random i just wanted to fit it in there =P
    i was trying crate an atmosphere...XD
    i failed miserably.

    I would change the bass( to maybe a clearer heavier sound) but im not really able to program plug-ins like massive so i used the pre-sets
    if u had any tips for programming and re-programming(pre-sets) plugins it would be much appreciated :)

    im not sure what Quantisised means..
    cause im new to this lol..

    Thanks though man for the feedback!
    I really appreciate it =)
     
  4. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Quantise is just when you can select anything to be put into time properly, like some of ur snare hits if i remember were ever so slightly out with each other

    if you select them and quantise then the will match properly
     
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    Oh!
    i see
    well im fixing up the track now as we speak(metaphorically =P)
    im adding a longer intro..
    about forty seconds longer ^^
    and im changing elements
    so i shall quantisise beats as u say =)
    thanks ^^
    -lewis!